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Tips for Creating a Winning Treatment


Some of you have done treatments or at least heard of them since they are de rigueur on broadcast/film shoots, however, they’re becoming much more commonplace for stills shoots. Photographers often have questions about what to include and what makes a winning treatment so today I’m going to demystify the process.


What are treatments and why are they important?

We’re not talking about the pretty dressing you use to adorn your windows. We’re talking about the pitch document that accompanies a client or agency bid. A treatment typically outlines how you plan to execute a project, discusses why you're the best person for the job, and is an opportunity to share your creative vision. They are your chance to showcase your technical and creative chops on how you may handle a challenging shot


Also, these are not to be confused with pre-pro books. Pre-pro books are created after a project has been awarded to the vendor and serve as a bible for shoot production. I’ll cover off what makes a good pre-pro book in a future post!


What makes a good treatment?

For starters, good grammar and punctuation. I’ve seen some pretty gnarly treatments in my day. Please spell-check or have a friend read through it to make sure it sakes mense – I mean makes sense. A well-designed, clean cover page that includes the project title and client/agency sets the tone. You can also hire a writer to help you craft the message.


When crafting your treatment, creatives and producers don’t want you regurgitate exactly what was said in the creative brief. They want to know how you plan to execute the concepts based on your vision. What are you bringing to the table and how is it different than the other bidders? Pay attention to what the creative and producer are saying on the creative call. Pick up on what’s important and note any particular challenges, concerns and client requests.


It’s also your opportunity to describe any technical and stylistic notes. Tell us why you think it's important to use a Lightstar for your night shot. Are there specific angles that are important to notate? Tell us how lighting, locations, and talent play into your vision. And don't forget to address how you may plan to tackle a specific production challenge, etc.


Include mood boards and images to convey your ideas in a descriptive way. Paint a picture of how you’d approach the shoot. Don’t forget that the agency and client are looking for your collaboration and what this campaign would look like through your lens.


And don’t forget to show us your personality and enthusiasm for the project. Tell us who you are as an artist. Show us your passion for the project while being authentic.


How long should a treatment be?

We’re not looking for a screenplay! Unfortunately, there’s no handbook outlining the appropriate number of pages for treatments but please make them concise. It all depends on the complexity and size of the project but they’re generally longer for broadcast/film. Communicate the information quickly without losing the point or the plot. No one wants a snoozer and make sure you’re not just saying the same thing 3 times over. Quality over quantity.


What do you do after you submit the treatment?

Ask your producer or point-person about the project timeline. Give the creatives and producer some time to digest the treatment. Make yourself available to any changes or questions that the creatives, producer and client may have regarding your treatment and answer them promptly. Make sure the team knows you’re interested and enthusiastic about the job but no need to stalk. If the job is meant to be, your vision will come to life in no time.


Good luck!


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